Developmental Editing

What Is Developmental Editing?

 

Developmental editing is a big-picture, deep-dive editing service that focuses on the heart of your book—its story structure, pacing, plot, character arcs, dialogue, and overall reader engagement. Unlike copyediting or proofreading, which address grammar and spelling, developmental editing looks at the framework of your story to ensure it flows logically, hooks readers from the first page, and delivers a satisfying conclusion.

 

This service is ideal for authors who want to transform a rough draft into a polished, compelling manuscript ready for the next stage of editing or submission to literary agents. Whether you’re writing fiction, memoir, or nonfiction, developmental editing helps refine your message and ensure every scene serves a purpose.

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Why Developmental Editing Matters

 

Even the best writers need outside perspective. Developmental editing can:

• Identify and resolve plot holes, pacing issues, or structural weaknesses.

• Strengthen character motivation and emotional arcs.

• Ensure genre expectations are met so readers stay engaged.

• Provide a clear revision plan so your next draft is significantly stronger.

 

By investing in developmental editing before line edits, you avoid expensive rework later and dramatically improve your book’s chances of connecting with readers.

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Pricing & Packages

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• Starter Edit – Up to 40,000 words – $1,200
  Includes a developmental edit and an editorial summary outlining big-picture changes.

• Standard Edit – Up to 80,000 words – $2,400
  Includes a full developmental edit and detailed chapter-by-chapter notes.

• Extended Edit – Up to 120,000 words – $3,600
  Includes in-text edits, a revision roadmap, and a 1-hour consultation.

• Premium Edit – Over 120,000 words – Custom Quote
  Includes a comprehensive edit, full roadmap, and follow-up coaching session.

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What You’ll Receive

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• A detailed editorial letter with big-picture feedback.

• Chapter-by-chapter analysis of story elements.

• In-text comments highlighting problem areas and suggested changes.

• A revision roadmap prioritizing next steps.

• One-on-one consultation (Extended + Premium packages).

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Who This Service Is For

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• Authors with a completed draft who want to strengthen plot, pacing, and characters.

• Writers unsure if their book is market-ready.

• Self-publishing authors seeking professional-level storytelling.

• Traditionally published authors working in a new genre or style.

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How the Process Works

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1. Submit Your Manuscript in Word or Google Docs.

2. Comprehensive Review by your assigned developmental editor.

3. Editorial Letter & Notes with recommendations for improvement.

4. Optional Consultation to walk through changes and next steps.

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FAQs About Developmental Editing

 

Q: What is the difference between developmental editing and copyediting?
Developmental editing focuses on story structure and content, while copyediting corrects grammar, punctuation, and style.

 

Q: How much does developmental editing cost?
Pricing ranges from $1,200 to $3,600, depending on manuscript length.

 

Q: How long does the process take?
Typically 4–6 weeks depending on length and complexity.

 

Q: Can I get developmental editing online?
Yes. Cherry Editorial provides developmental editing to authors worldwide through a fully remote process.

 

Q: Do you work with all genres?
We specialize in fiction, memoir, nonfiction, and young adult but accept most genres.